What an effort. Most of the time, I get bad grades in my essays because of sentence structure and punctuation because I didn't revise my essay after writing them. For example, I struggled with mechanical errors in the essay “The Three Main Methods” because I did not use a “formal tone” that “omits personal pronouns,” which were not necessary. Also, another comment I had in the same essay was "review your work", which explains why I had mechanical errors because if I had reviewed my paper before submitting it, I would have had fewer errors due to correcting my mistakes first to send my card (“The Three”). Therefore, one way to improve this weakness can be to reread my essay more than once and check the punctuation because mechanical problems can be easy to fix; moreover, reading other articles could also help me develop my weakness of having bad sentence structure, which can help to find the right tone for each sentence, which can develop the main idea I want to express without using unnecessary